pls! help my with your english!! Can anyone help me to study english! ^^ [the second day]
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Hello everyone! My name is Ploy Pimchan. I live in Bangkok Thailand and I'm in grade6. This is my second day to writing about my dream... I want to be a good doctor because of my family.I want practice English by my self. so...let see how about my practice today!
1. I'm start to read,When I sew every word that spell in English.
2. I'm start to listen,When I hear English music and try to sing. When I'm sing everyone in my house have look at me, they tell me that “you should to stop!” my father tell me like this but he listen every music that I'm singing ^^ and say to me “you have a good voice my dear!” I very pound with my voice! Have anyone want to listen my song!?
My mother ask me “why do you want to go to book shop” because I never go to book shop. This is my first time to go there!
I tell my mon “I want to read the book! Every books in B2S and SE-ED are my new world! I want to know another word and how to improved my English. The important thing is I can read every book,there are free!!! ^^” then I take a notebook and pen and was going there.
I very play attention and concentrate with a book.They are many people looking around at me because I had sitting more than 3hours,lol but I still red the book.
After this I have to go home. On the way I still sing the English song in my mind and I think I want to going to the book shop again and again.There have many thing that I want to know. I want to be a good do daughter. I want to help my family,as same as they help me.[หนูตั้งใจจะเขียนว่า " อยากจะดูแลพ่อแม่ให้เหมือนที่ท่านดูแลหนู และถ้าเป็นไปได้ก็อยากทำให้ท่านสะบายมากกว่านี้” ใครพอรู้ช่วยบอกหน่อยคะ ^^ ]
on my dream...I can't going to my dream if i don't have google to teach me and people in Dek-d... thank you everyone to read my writing. I very glad to see you in my writing... ^^
----------Have someone ask me ------------
“Why you didn't go to study in tutor?” [ติวเตอร์ค่ะ หนูสะกดไม่ถูก]
my answer : because I don't have enough money to pay. [thank you Lunarสีรุ้ง (@kevarin)
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---------thank you----------
สวยxsexy (@hinazzy)
bewoodaod (@bewoodaod)
นิชา
anonymous (anony@gmail.com)
Defpico2 (@defpico2)
pang
Stamp_PAlamPlyy (@stamppalmply)
Lunarสีรุ้ง (@kevarin)
another people that have to read my writing, you are my good teacher:"D
PS: 1. If i writing something wrong please tell me. I will try and try again to do my best!
2. have anyone tell me, How can I get ID from Dek-d.com T_____T
With love
Ploy Pimchan
ploy pinchan
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ploy you are a very very good daughter
i think your mom and dad they will proud of you.
i cannot tell you that you write something wrong or what
because I'm not sure
but you are my inspiration to learn not just only english but every subject
i want to make my mom and dad proud like you.
ps. i want to be a doctor too! and i want to be your friend
your welcome and nice to meet you.I sew you in "first day writing". I very glad to have a new friend like you. by the way I don't have line ID, I didn't play everything but...but! I wanna create Dek-d ID to contact everyone ^^
thank you a lot :"D
สมัครID ตรงมุมขวาบนจ้ะ ที่เขียนว่า "เข้าสู่ระบบ"
กดที่คำนี้ แล้วดูข้างล่างแถบสีส้มที่เขียนว่า"เข้าสู่ระบบ"
มันจะมีคำว่า ลืมรหัสผ่าน กับ สมัครสมาชิก
กดคำว่า "สมัครสมาชิก" แล้วก็ทำตามขั้นตอนได้เลยจ้ะ :)
Hey! We meet agian... Haha
I'm glad you're back.
Wow! Your skill is upgrade. I can feel it.
What can I do if I want to here your vioce(sing a song). lol
The way that you practice English is great.
Good job!
I'm very proud that I can help you more or less.
And I'm sure your parents are proud of you too.
Don't fear to make a mistake. Because we learn from our mistakes.
Good luck.
ดูแล = take care
พ่อแม่ = parents
เหมือน = like
เป็นไปได้ = possible
สบาย = comfortable
How to register Dek-d
http://www.dek-d.com/register/
put your information 3 step
and insist your e-mail.
อยากจะดูแลพ่อแม่ให้เหมือนที่ท่านดูแลหนู และถ้าเป็นไปได้ก็อยากทำให้ท่านสะบายมากกว่านี้
I want to take care my parents,If it possible to make they comfortable.
ถูกไหมคะ? ดีใจจังที่เจอพี่อีก ^^ วันนี้ไปตามที่พี่บอกคะ ไปคนเดี๋ยวด้วย แม่ กับ ป๊า ไปทำงาน หนูไปนั่งอ่านหนังสือตั้งนาน แต่อ่านไปอ่านมาก็หลับ รู้ตัวอีกทีแม่ก็มารับ ได้อะไรเยอะแยะเลย เพราะมีพี่คนที่นั่งข้างๆช่วยสอน ขอบคุณอีกครั้งค่ะ ^^
I want to take care of my parents just the way they took care of me. If it possible I want to make them feel more comfortable.
haha really? I love to read english book too. I'm very exiting and fun with English.
Me too. :D great to see you.
Your welcome girl!
you can talk with me if you want.
I shall answer you. If I can!
love xoxo... (xoxo is mean hug and kiss = jubjub in Thai haha)
Ahh... Hi. my name's jane. i have been read your article before. i want to talk with you but i don't have the guts to writting in english. but now i have enough guts because of you. you're my inspiration.
i'm in grade5.(i'm younger than you, right?) i live in chiang rai. i don't know what i want to be in my future. but a thing that i know... i love english. but i don't have enough guts for speaking, reading, writting and anyelse. but because of you..you...you... you're my inspiration, acturlly.
i have been practiced my english skill at a moment.
-i try sung english song.
-i try translate carton to english.
-i try read english book.
it's help me get better skill. but it's just a moment. after that i'm lazy. Hahaha
it's same as you say. google is the best teacher. i search vocabulary in website google a lot. Ahh... i think i should sleep already. this time is 0.54 a.m. bye~ i glad to practice english at the same time with you.
ps.if i'm mistake in this artice. please tell me that i wrong.
ok. time to sleep. see you again.
oh. i almost forgot.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BVip0GQa9U4
this is lingling's clip. she's exchange student to america. she can teach you english. she's a good teacher.
Well done little girl! :D
Though I can't speak English naturally like a native speaker, I'm very glad to be able to help you in some way.
ก่อนอื่นเลยขอพูดถึงไวยากรณ์ที่ผิดอย่างเห็นได้ชัดนะ
- I'm start to คำว่า start นี้เป็นคำกริยาอยู่แล้ว ไม่ต้องมี verb to be (am) นำหน้า เพราะฉะนั้นที่ถูกคือ I start to แต่ถ้าเป็น continuous tense (กำลังกระทำ) เช่น When I'm sing จะใช้ verb to be + verb+ing >> When I'm singing
- you should to stop! คำว่า should สามารถนำหน้า verb ได้เลยไม่ต้องมี to เชื่อม เพราะฉะนั้นจะเป็น you should stop แทน
- listen ใช้คู่กับ to >> listen to something
- how to improved กับ I want to going to ถ้ามี to นำหน้า คำกริยาที่ตามมาจะต้องเป็นรูปธรรมดาเท่านั้น เช่น how to improve กับ I want to go to
- They are many people looking around at me ที่ถูกควรจะเป็น There were many people looking at me ถ้าจะบอกว่ามีอะไรจะใช้ there is/are แต่ในที้นี้ใช้ were เพราะเป็นเหตุการณ์ในอดีต ส่วนคำว่า looking around จะแปลว่ามองไปรอบๆมากกว่า
- I had sitting more than 3hours ประโยคนี้พลอยอยากจะใช้ perfect tense หรือเปล่าจ๊ะ ถ้าใช่ที่ถูกน่าจะเป็น I had sat there for more than 3 hours เพราะว่า verb to have ใช้กับ verb ช่อง 3 ส่วนถ้าจะบอกระยะเวลาจะใช้ for ตามด้วยระยะเวลา ที่เติม there(ที่นั่น) จะเป็นการขยายความให้เข้าใจง่ายขึ้น
- I want to be a good do daughter. ประโยคนี้ไม่แน่ใจว่าพิมพ์ผิดหรือว่าต้องการจะบอกอะไร แต่ถ้าไม่ได้จะสื่อความหมายพิเศษอะไร แค่ I want to be a good daughter. ก็พอแล้ว
- I can't going to my dream เข้าใจว่าน่าจะหมายถึง I can't reach/achieve my dream (ฉันคงไปไม่ถึงความฝัน) ใช่ไหมจ๊ะ?
- I very glad คำว่า glad เป็น adjective เพราะฉะนั้นต้องมี verb to be ช่วย >> I'm very glad
ส่วนอื่นๆที่ผิดเท่าที่เห็นก็มีคำศัพท์และการใช้ tense บางประโยค แต่ถ้าจะให้อธิบายคงจะยาว และคิดว่าเรื่อง tense น่าจะได้เรียนในห้องเรียน
อาจจะตกหล่นไปบ้าง ไม่ต้องจำที่บอกไปทั้งหมดก็ได้ ค่อยๆเรียนรู้ไปเรื่อยๆจะทำให้จำได้มากกว่ายัดความรู้ทั้งหมดเข้าไปในสมองทีเดียวนะจ๊ะ สู้ๆ :D
Besides, the email address you see is not my actual one. Don't email me using it, ok? lol
N'Ploy, I've just read your writing. I'm glad to read it again.
you had activities a lot but it's a good job.
if you want to excellent in english you should usually listen with a native speaker.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/ <-- this web may help you.
thank you again and again ka xoxo!!! <3
I very excite and glad to see how can another person practice English!You are my inspiration too! Do you know your English is very excellent.You don't be guts to do the best thing,to do the correct way my dear. I hope we can be a good friend and share our experience for improve our English!
and hope we can joint to sing the song together lolll :"D
Nice to meet you ^^
O hi yo go sai a mush su! thank you so much!! how about my Japanese lol :"D
How are you my sister? I very glad to read you comment and I will applied to study more!
I swear in the future I will talking with you like a native speaker!! and I wish you successful for study work...everything in your life^^ and... I wish your family happy full of year!
with love
ploy pimchan
good afternoon P'pang. I glad to see you reply me today. thank you a lot! I have a big problem,How to spell the word... can you help me?
I saw u in ur first day writing already. I glad to see grade 6 student who into English cuz some ppl say English is very hard but not for me. I luv English.I think English is one of very important language in the world.I sometimes chat in English with my friends.
If u want to have a perfect English. I have some trick for u.
1.Listen to English music.
2.Read English book.
3.speak English for a lot.
I hope and I believe u will have perfect English in future
Hello~ Ploy ^^
It seem like your passage has been upgrading. You have improve a lot. Congratulation girl! I believe that you will have a great future because of your English. Keep on fighting. Fight! Fight! Fight!~
Grammar Correction:
present Past
See Saw
"You should to stop"- you should stop
I feel very proud of my voice.
I start to go to SE-ED book.....
They're free (not there free)
Good luck girl ^^
Hello Nong Ploy. If you want to succeed you have to have determination, which I can see you do. After that, it's all about putting in the hard work.
There are many people that want to learn English quickly, but there is no quick way to do it. They soon find that out and give up, or begin losing interest in learning. You have to spend a lot of time reading, listening, and of course speaking.
From what I see, you are already doing better than most students your age. Just keep trying and believe me, it will get easier in time.
I really like your way of thinking :) And decided that I will give you a little help. If you want to chat with somebody in English, search for my LINE id " uefauefa " But if you don't have one, you can send me email and we can discuss about this later. My email is shown below :D
pancake_coconut@hotmail.com
lol. Actually it's "ohayougozaimasu" which means good morning.
I'm doing fine, just a bit busy with homework. How about you?
By the way, in the sentence "I swear in the future I will talking with you like a native speaker!!", you should use the word "promise" instead of "swear". I understand what you wanted to say but I think "swear" is a bit too harsh in this case. Besides, it should be "I will talk" not "I will talking".
Anyway, I, too, wish you all the best and hope all your dreams come true. Ganbatte ne! (means "do your best or สู้ๆ") :D
I very glad to see you again my sister! thank you I will study on you comment!!! ^^
Dear N'Ploy
I can't believe you are a G.6 student! Your English is quite good. Email me if you need any help. Always appreciate people who want to be better.
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