เขียนจดหมายขอทุน ช่วยเช็คด้วยค่ะ TT

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ตามหัวข้อเลยค่ะ พอดีกำลังขอทุน summer ของ Ochanomizu university
เค้าให้ตอบคำถาม ช่วยเช็คทีค่ะ TT

อันนี้เป็นใบที่เค้าให้มาค่ะ
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อันนี้เป็นTheme ที่เลือกค่ะ
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1. Why do you want to study in Japan (Ochanomizu University)?
Since in childhood until now, japanese cultures have infulenced me a lot. They enlightened me to be a japanism.Along my life, I has experienced about Japan such as manga, reading japanese literature, watching japanese movie, etc. I think Japan is the place that really various, but in the same time it stills harmonic. In my opinion, Japan is an another world that's really enigmatic. That's why I choose to study in Japan,especially Ochanomizu University, because after I heard this programme,I watched many reviews of this university. I think this university is really reliable. It looks very clean, safety and has many experiences about programme for exchange students. That's why I choose to participate this program.

2. Why did you choose your theme? What do you expect from the course?
I choose themeI, because I really interested in Japanese social. I think it's really various and complex. I would like to know how they organize their social structures, what's the perspective that japaneses in this age (contemporary) use? The perspective that could make the country bowl along and enigmatic. I expected that I could deeply understand how japaneses think and could know the disadvantages and advantages of their perspectives through each other comments. Not only knowledge but friendship between colleagues and teachers. I think it would really fun.

3. How will the Summer Programme contribute to your future studies and career?
This summer programme gives chance for me to have this rare experiences. This programme would make me learn more about thoughts of people who have splendid way of life. It will increase my mind and idea. It will give new ideas, perspective to me, so it will help me to design buildings that think more for people who live and present other ways that give new different things to this world. It will make me to a great thinker that will bring me to a great designer.

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[Blue Snow]

Since my childhood until now, japanese cultures have infulenced me a lot. They enlightened me to be a japanism. Along my life, I have experienced many things about Japan such as manga, reading japanese literatures, watching japanese movies, etc. I think Japan is a very variety place, but in the same time it stills harmonic. In my opinion, Japan is another world that's really enigmatic. That's why I chose to study in Ochanomizu University because after I heard about this programme, I read many reviews of this university. I think this university is really reliable. It looks very clean, safe and has many experiences about programmes for exchange students. That's why I choose to participate in this program.

I choose themeI, because I'm really interested in Japanese social. I think it's various and complex. I would like to know how they organized their social structures, what's the perspective that the Japanese in this age (contemporary) use? The perspective that could make the country bowl along and enigmatic. I hope that I would be able to deeply understand how the Japanese think and could know the disadvantages and advantages of their perspectives through each other's comments. Not only knowledge but friendship between colleagues and teachers. I think it would be really fun.

This summer programme will give me the chance for me to have this rare experience. This programme would help me learn more about thoughts of people who have splendid ways of life. It will increase my mind and idea. It will give me new ideas, perspective to me, so it will help me design buildings that are more caring for people who live and present other ways that give new different things to this world. It will make me a great thinker that will help me become a great designer.

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