pls! help me with your english! [third day]
hello! This is Ploy Pimchan. How are you today? Is it nice?
Today I study Biological about the cell theory.
I very excite to know about the cell. It really!? In our body have the small thing and it very important for our too!!
Cell is the basic unit in the living thing. I want to know, how many unit of cell in my body,is it a lot? Are they sleep? By the way If I was a cell of the skin to cover our body I will gonna be cry everyday because sometime I very lazy to take a shower lol :(
Do you know inside our body have bacteria. The name of the bacteria is Mitochondrion.They can have a baby because they have DNA! HO my God my baby of Mitochondrion.
After read I was going to buy chicken with mother. In the market have a few of a people.They are fear for the news.I pray for Thailand I hope our Thai people can pass this situation...
Let I talk about this word “actually” Have anyone know how to use this word. I really confuse...
Tomorrow I have go to school again.I hope tomorrow was my beautiful day again! :D
Thank you everyone to read my writing.I glad to see you... and see you soon ^^
with love
Ploy Pimchan
ps. 1 I already creat my ID Thank you!!!
2 I already creat a writing ----> "Please! Help me with your english"if I have time to do, I will writing everything on it.I hope we can share our experience for improve our English!
3. this is the last writing that I will post on the board...
I don't have another world to say and don't have another thing to give to you. but... thank you so much for everyting for everyone... ^^
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From [second day] http://www.dek-d.com/board/view/3134950/
Oh~ i can't belive it's the last time for your writing. i really want to talk with you again and again. Talking about cell, it's interesting. i love biology subject but just some chapter of it. i hope you get better english skill and to be doctor in future. Finally, i'm glad to talk with you. it's the first time that i guts to talk with someone in english.
ps. i hope i can see you again. i'm sorry if my writing incorrectly.
hello!! glad to see you again!! this is my last writing to post on the board but I will post it on my writing
http://my.dek-d.com/pimchan-k-ploy/writer/view.php?id=1095178
If you have time.please coming to read my writing. I will waiting for you!! ^^
Oh, Wow~ i see it and follow you already. see you again next time.
Hi there!
Today is terrible for me.lol ;(
You already study biology! Yippee! Actually(ที่จริงแล้ว) I love this subject very much.
I advise you to read 'Once upon a time...life' is book about human body. (ภาษาไทยชื่ิอ นิทานชีวิต จักรกลของร่างกาย)
You know bacteria have DNA so they can give birth to next generation.
They are very scary. But some of them have good bacteria such as Lactobacillus.
They are helpful bacteria.
I wish you success!
You're really nice girl.
,Love
byebye little doctor! Haha
What happen with you to day?
Actually I have no idea to writing again but my mother tell me "don't give up". Do you know every time that I lazy I think of my mother and father, then I think I can't go back. I want to do it better than today.
so.... sooo.... I already creat my writing.... If you have time please coming to read my writing. I will waiting for you... ^^ xoxo
http://my.dek-d.com/pimchan-k-ploy/writer/view.php?id=1095178
hello! This is Ploy Pimchan. How are you today? Is it nice? (You can try to use another word to. Such as How is your day?, Do u having a nice day?)
Today I study Biological about the cell theory.
I very excite to know about the cell. :: ("Very" is Adjective so it can't be use after Subject Ex. I love u very much, This cloth is very expensive. You can use "so" or "really" instead --> I am so excited <Excite is Verb so you need to change its form before using it --> You are excited. Why use excited? Because you have already feel that. And what if you feeling it now?? Then we use You are "so" exciting to know about cells <you can't use the cell. Why? Because there is a lot of cells in our body so u need to put "s" behind.)
It really!? ::
(You don't need to put "it" when you fascinated by something you can just say "Really?")
In our body have the small thing and it very important for our too!! ::
(There is these small things in our body and it is very important to us too. Your body, Place, Country can't have anything if u wanna say that your body have cells u shold use "There is cells in our body"instead. Similar to places, There is another people inside my house. Do not use My house have another people right?)
Cell is the basic unit in the living thing. (Living things because there is a lot of living things right? Not just only one.)
I want to know, how many unit of cell in my body,is it a lot? Are they sleep?
(I want to know how many cells in my body. or I wonder, How many cells I have in my body.)
By the way If I was a cell of the skin to cover our body I will gonna be cry everyday because sometime I very lazy to take a shower lol :(
(By the way if I were a skin cell that cover my body I would cry everyday because sometimes I am too lazy to take a shower."If I were + I would" its new grammar that u will learn in the future. But I will explain it for u now, we can use this grammar when we wanna talk about something that can never happen. U can't be a cell right? so use "If I were ....., I would ...." Ex. If I were you, I would never school again. <I can never be you right? then use If I were.>)
Do you know inside our body have bacteria. ::
(Again, Our body can't have anything so its gonna be like this -->
Do you know that we have bacteria inside our body. or Do you know that there is Bacteria in our body.)
The name of the bacteria is Mitochondrion.They can have a baby because they have DNA! HO my God my baby of Mitochondrion.
After read I was going to buy chicken with mother. ::
(U trying to use new grammar that impressive but u should understand this grammar before using it. "I was going to" use with something u meant to do but didn't do. such as I was going to study English but then I fall asleep. --> you are about to study but then u didn't do it. <U can use this --> After I read, I went to buy chickens with my mother. Why Past simple tense? Because you did it. When you writing this u went to market already and then come back, it's all finished.)
In the market have a few of a people. ::
(Again, Place can't have something so what should we change?)
They are fear for the news. (Fear is Noun. Can u use noun after subject? U should use. They are afraid of news.)
I pray for Thailand I hope our Thai people can pass this situation...
Let I talk about this word “actually” Have anyone know how to use this word. I really confuse... (First when u use "Let" it should follow with objective so it's gonna be " Let me talk about..")
(Actually means ที่จริงแล้ว, จริงๆแล้ว Use with facts or express wonder, surprise Ex. Foreigners think that Thai people are stupid but actually they are smart. or I actually won the lottery.)
If u can't understand what I have explained. I can explain again in Thai so it will be easier for u to understand. Good luck :)
I'm sorry. I have a lot of mistake. since January,I read the grammar book. I sew the new grammar that I never study it before "Conditional Sentence". I actually done exercise on the book but I don't understand it.
I will study it again and again
Ps : 1 How can I contact you??
2 I will post my writing on
http://my.dek-d.com/pimchan-k-ploy/writer/view.php?id=1095178
I will waiting for you ^^
with love
ploy pimchan
My name is Mook na. I'm in grade 7.
I saw u in the first and second day already and I had comment at ur second day writing already too.
I'm happy to see u again and I think u r very intelligent children. I don't have perfect grammar but I have good accent. I know u want better writting but don't forget to speak a lot 'cuz if u go oversea speaking is more important than writing and another thing u must learning a lot is listening 'cuz if u go oversea foreign people speak very fast so u must have good listening too.
See you soon and you can contact me on my i.d. or add me to be ur friend
Actually I had comment on your second day essay.
But here is my email :: thenuttaphorn@hotmail.com
U can send me an email if u have any question.
I don't check Dek-D much, if u want me to be your tutor I can do it for free. Just send me an email and I can teach u everyday. I'm glad I can help :)
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