SAT Writing (Improving Sentences) โดย Majesticia ( ควิซทดสอบ )

1 Benjamin Franklin demonstrated his enthusiasm for innoculation against smallpox, he collaborated on many studies that demonstrated the procedure's effectiveness.

smallpox, he was collaborating

smallpox by collaborating

small pox, he collaborated

smallpox and collaborating

smallpox, and he collaborated

2 Although once being found in abundance on the North American continent, many species of Amazon parrot have now become nearly extinct.

Despite their being found once in abundance

Once they were found in abundance

Although once being found in abundance

Although they were once found in abundance

Even though it was once found in abundance

3 Most often associated with medieval Europe, Japanese society was based on feudalism during the same period.

Most often associated with medieval europe, Japanese society was based on feudalism

Its association with medieval Europe occurring most often, Japanese society was based on feudalism

Most often associated with medieval Europe, feudalism formed the basis of Japanese society

Being most often associated with medieval Europe, feudalism had also been the basis for Japanese society

Most often associated with medieval Europe, Japanese society based on feudalism

4 Despite negotiations that were threatening to collapse, the senators were able to salvage the bill that they had worked so long to prepare.

negotiations whose collapse was threatening

negotiations where collapse was threatened

negotiations, for which collapse was a threat

negotiations that were threatening to collapse

negotiations, threatening to collapse

5 Patrons of the restaurant find it at once impressive because of its superior quality, but its poor service makes eating there unpleasant.

quality, although its poor service makes it unpleasant for them to eat there

quality, but its poor service makes eating there unpleasant

quality while having poor service that makes eating there unpleasant

and unpleasant because of its poor service

quality, and its poor service makes eating there unpleasant also