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ช่วยเรียบเรียง หรือตรงไหนผิดช่วยแก้ให้หน่อยค่ะ
My best friend’s name is Jane. she is tall. her eyes are brown and her hair is dark brown. she is the first friend at university. we are live in the same dormitory . I like Jane as she is straightforward. she is impatient. She studying in faculty of Science but I studying in faculty of Humanities. we do everything together. we away have breakfast together. we are studying different subjects when the final exam we read a book together. her friends are my friends. she likes to watch English movies, although I don't like I still going with her. She likes to go shopping at flea market. we like going to hang out, listening to music and dancing. we like and interested in the same thing. we always help each other. She is able to know when I feel happy or when I feel sad. when I have problem Jane can give me some good advice. I think Jane is my best friend because she understand me and I understand her so we become to be close and best friend.
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[silver fox]

She's my first friend in university. We live in the same dormitory
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She studies in the faculty of Science and I study in the faculty of Humanities.
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We always have breakfast together.
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We study different subjects but during the exam we can read books together.
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She likes Enhlish movies, although I dont like them I still go with her.
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We like hanging out,
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We are interested and like the same things.
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She understands me and I understand her, so we become closer friends

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[หมีย้อย เป็นแค่คนธรรมดา]

My best friend’s name Jane. She is tall, she has brown eyes and her hair is dark brown. She's my first friend at the university. We are live in the same dormitory. And I like her as straightforward person; she is impatient. However even she's studying in faculty of Science and I studying in faculty of Humanities, but we're away hang out, and have breakfast together. Although we are studying in different course, but when the final come; we away read a book together. Also her friends are like my friends. She likes to watch English movies, although, I don't like to watch it but I still going to watch with her. She likes to shopping at flea market, either I; we like to hang out, listen to music, dance together, and always help each other. Also we like to do the same stuff as well. And she alway knew when I'll feel happy and when I'll feel sad. Everytime I have problem, she's the one who can give me some good advice. In my opinion, I believe she's my best friend because we understand each other very well, so that what we become closer friend. 
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